You, There! Mun!
7 Jan 2008 09:01 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
broadsword_babeI think it's time you and I had a chat. I'd like to start by saying that keeping me on a short least isn't going to do either of us any favors. There is a war brewing, and I know a thing or two about wars. I know it isn't easy trying to put what I've shown you into words: the stench of death, the roar of over two hundred thousand voices, the buzzing of flies over corpses. Don't get me wrong. I'm glad you're my writer, but for the love of Freyja, write what I'm telling you! Stop watering it down and stop holding me back. Truth to tell, you're only holding yourself back. Oh, and I do wish you'd stop getting distracted when I'm trying to talk to you.
Right, now, the workout piece turned out fine, but you really need to work on your "angst" vocabulary. Meg, and others, may be able to give you a post right off, and that's fine for them. I would prefer if you held off awhile on mine. Quite often, I find that I require revisions. I know that many of the other muns, and some muses, have probably never been on a battlefield, but I do like the line "cacophony of death" you wrote for another OC muse.
You do have a great way with words, but you need to choose them carefully and wisely. But more importantly is, quit worrying about what other people think, and trust me. I'm not a ruthless murderer who pillages and plunders every chance they get. I protect me and my own. A mother grizzly has nothing on me, and you'd do well to remember that and stop tempering my ideas by watering them down.
Right, now, the workout piece turned out fine, but you really need to work on your "angst" vocabulary. Meg, and others, may be able to give you a post right off, and that's fine for them. I would prefer if you held off awhile on mine. Quite often, I find that I require revisions. I know that many of the other muns, and some muses, have probably never been on a battlefield, but I do like the line "cacophony of death" you wrote for another OC muse.
You do have a great way with words, but you need to choose them carefully and wisely. But more importantly is, quit worrying about what other people think, and trust me. I'm not a ruthless murderer who pillages and plunders every chance they get. I protect me and my own. A mother grizzly has nothing on me, and you'd do well to remember that and stop tempering my ideas by watering them down.
